Reviewed at
2026-05-27 15:12:57 UTC
Reviewer
system
Points awarded
5
Ponts awarded
0
Comment / reason
overall, much better, approving it, but if you want to improve it even more - - Inner Circle is set to "Contract" employment type. switch to volunteer or programs, recruiters read "Contract" as paid work-for-hire. - headline is a five-piece pipe stack right now. pick one positioning angle, around seven words, the rest can live in the about. - about is one ai-voice sentence. rewrite three or four lines in your own voice with one concrete thing you've actually done. - Inner Circle bullets are triadic ("threads, memes, and infographics"). swap for one specific output, a thread that landed, post counts, something you actually shipped. - profile photo reads as a dark silhouette right now. a clear daylight shot lands wider for recruiters who haven't met you yet. - skills section is two items, mixed Indonesian and English. pick one language and fill it with what you bring, or hide it for now. - no X or Telegram in contact. for a Web3 profile worth adding so people can find you outside LinkedIn. - 0 followers, one repost. add people this week (recruiters, hr, anyone in crypto), 50-100 targeted connects, then ship one real post by end of week one.