Reviewed at
2026-05-23 11:54:52 UTC
Reviewer
system
Comment / reason
display name. "mizul dzz" is a handle, not a real first plus last name. linkedin suspends nickname accounts without warning. use what's on your id, the handle can live in the url. headline is a six-title buzzword stack ending in a trailing pipe. exactly what the anti-resume drop named. pick one positioning, seven words, drop the rest. "Community Strategist at Syndicate Inner Circle" inside the headline is the hard flag. you're an initiate, not a strategist. notion guide says inner circle gets framed honestly under volunteer or programs, not inflated to a leadership title. recruiters fact-check this in two clicks. about. "I work at the intersection of community and Web3 technology where communication, trust, and complex systems need to operate in harmony." one sentence in ai voice, nothing concrete about you. rewrite as three or four lines in your own voice with one specific thing you've actually shipped. inner circle experience entry. description is "growth in community", three words, says nothing. rewrite in active voice with what you're doing this week. employment type set to Part-time is still wrong, switch to volunteer or programs. "4+ Years Experience" in the headline. oldest role on your profile is october 2025, that's 8 months. either add the older roles or drop the years claim. recruiters count, and the gap is louder than the claim. activity is one repost and zero followers, network's tiny. add people this week (recruiters, hr, crypto folks), fifty to a hundred targeted connects. then ship one real post by end of week one. keep your actual face. same account-safety axis as the name. skills section is two entries, mixed languages. fill it in one language with what you actually bring, or hide it. i'm rejecting this. positioning is running ahead of the receipts. cleanup is mostly cutting, not new writing. what i'd love to see on resubmit: 1. real first plus last name in the display field. 2. one-line headline, real positioning, no buzzword stack. 3. drop "Community Strategist at Syndicate Inner Circle" from the headline. 4. about section in your voice with one concrete thing in it. 5. inner circle entry, employment type off part-time, description in active voice. 6. back the "4+ years" claim with visible roles or drop it. 7. add people (recruiters, hr, crypto folks) and ship one post by end of week one. 8. clearer photo of your face. clean it up and send again.